I like it, but ---
I dunno why Bribaetz doesn't like it due to it effects - I personally find it to be quite advanced and nicely done.
I particulary like how you used the 3/4 beat for buildup
I do - however, hate the "so sexy" sample when you repeat it as much as you did - I'd also try putting reverb on it.
Actually, I'd try to put reverb on just about every instrument there.